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Information Report
Location: 1647 Rancho, El Fuego
Occurrence Date: 7-25-15
Persons: Tunney, Carol P. DOB 1-21-66
Persons: Tunney, Katherine L. DOB 9-16-89

Details
On 7-25-15 at 1230 I received a radio call to meet reporting party Katherine Tunney at 1230 hours. Upon reaching the address I began by talking with Katherine Tunney. Tunney said she was getting ready to leave her residence at 1215 hours when she saw a white Toyota van wagon stopped in front of her residence in the middle of the street facing westbound. She said the sole occupant of the van was sitting in the seat facing her residence and taking pictures of her residence. From what she could see she described the person in the vehicle as a white male with gray hair.
Tunney made an attempt to confront the person in the van but once she exited her residence the person in the van closed their window and sped off. Tunney was able to see the license plate number. 836L92F. I looked up the license plate in the database and the results came up as a 2004 Toyota Wagon registered to Bond, Stephen D., 3381 El Balazo, El Fuego.
I talked to Katherine Tunney's mother, Carol Tunney, to  get more information about the incident. Carol Tunney said she filed a report in April because a man had approached her while she was planting and asked for her name. Carol responded by asking for his name but the man left after that. Carol saw the license plate. ISPYONU. I ran a license plate check and it came up as a 2008 SAAB registered to Toomey, Richard, 36 Paseo De Bonito, El Rancho.
I told both Carol Tunney and Katherine Tunney that no crime had been committed and the information has been filed.